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write
of passage | volume 1
number 16
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"I
write entirely to find out what I'm thinking, what I'm
looking at, what I see and what it means. What I want
and what I fear." -Joan Didion
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since June 2004 | Eboni Rafus uncovers answers to the query "What
does it mean to be a writer?" Write of Passage is an
open journal revealing her creative process and providing inspiration
for each reader to define and develop a practice, as well. |
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Eboni
Rafus
(eMail)
is an MFA hopeful within UMass
Amherst's prestigious Creative Writing program. Although she
has done stints as a production assistant, casting assistant,
and elementary school teacher, expression through the written
word has long been her first love. Eboni resides in Amherst,
Massachusetts.
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Richard
Baumgart (eMail
Web
site) has been an artist for 30 years. He has studied art
in New
York City, Pont-Aven,
France
and London.
Baumgart now lives and works in New
London, New
Hampshire.
His work is representational (though not 'realistic') and combines
many of the qualities and techniques of Picasso,
Braque
and Matisse.
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Although,
as writers and readers, we often throw around the term 'good writing',
Ive yet to see a concrete definition of what that is, with
respect to fiction. Is there a criterion somewhere, an absolute
rubric, that's eluding me? How do I recognize my aspiration? How
will I know when I get there?
Of course, there's Harold
Blooms The
Western Canon, a list of examples of 'good writing'. My
two favorite authors, Toni
Morrison and Gloria
Naylor, are on the list, but not for my two favorite novelsSula
and Linden
Hills. How do I compare Blooms canon with Modern
Librarys list of the 100
Best Novels or Radcliffe
Publishings
rival list? It seems hard to balance popularity with craft.
Then, there's the time issue. How long does it take to become
a classic? Over the past five years alone there have been several
well-written novels published that just havent made it to
any of those lists, yetbooks like, Zadie Smiths brilliant
On
Beauty .
I wont even get into the multicultural and feminist issues
which problematize the creation of these lists. List-making, you
see, isn't an exact science.
Im sure that every Creative Writing teacher could tell you
what constitutes 'good writing'at least, what they
consider to be good. But what if I happen to disagree? What if
I hate Melville?
Think Hemingway
is overrated? Only feel so-so about Alice
Munroe? Does that mean I'm a bad reader and, therefore, will
be a bad writer? Does it matter that I'm a Creative Writing teacher,
myself?
Sure, I have an overall sense of Good vs. Bad: James
Joyce vs. Stephen
King. I know which authors arent being taught
in our literature classes: Danielle
Steele, James
Patterson, and Dan
Brown. I know what I'm ashamed to admit to my MFAthat,
in my spare time, I'm reading Harry
Potter and the Half-Blood Prince, Wicked,
and books that would be considered 'Chick
Lit'. I have an inkling of what would be considered pedestrian,
artless writing. So, it makes sense that as long as I dont
write what might be thought of as a genre piece, I have a fair
shot of writing something good. Alas, it isn't that easy.
Frankly,
I've stopped thinking of my own writing in the broad terms of
'good' or 'bad' and have begun separating them into categories
of 'good enough'.
My worst writing falls into the lowest category, 'Good Enough
for My Mother', which doesnt necessarily have to be any
good, whatsoever. A mothers love is unconditional and, therefore,
her childs prose is never short of amazing. If I'm
my own harshest critic, my adoring mother is my most generous.
I show her my work when I need a pat on the back or a word of
encouragement.
There's also 'Good Enough for Workshop', which doesnt actually
have to be that good, either, because the purpose of a workshop
is to take 'pretty good' writing and make it better. I always
tell myself, when I'm pouring over a submission, that it's supposed
to be an imperfect first or second draft. After all, if it
were polished, there would be no reason to bring it to my class.
Indeed, a workshop piece only has to be good enough as to not
be embarrassing.
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A notch above
that category is 'Good Enough for an Intimate Reading'. These
pieces should be more complete and polished than workshop pieces.
There should be, at the very least, some stellar description and
a strong voice. Yet, depending on the format of the reading and
who's in the audience, the writing doesn't have to be my best.
Frequently, at readings, I'm only given the floor for five to
eight minutes. Since I couldnt possibly read an entire story
in that time, I can just pick the best four or five pages. Also,
since I'm usually hosting the readings in which I perform, the
audience tends to be full of my friends. Although they're not
as blindly devoted to me and my writing as my mother is, they
will be so kind as to give me my criticism with thin a layer of
sugar-coating. Lately, Ive even taken up the practice of
reading near the end of the evening, which means that any strangers
that may have wondered into the bookstore where the reading is
being held would have left , by then, and any fair-weather
friends would have slipped out during the wine and cheese break,
leaving only my closest friends to help support any delusions
I harbor about my talent.
You'd think that 'Good Enough for Publication' would mean that
the writing has to be the best. A publication's readership is
likely to be much larger than a local bookstore audience. And,
of course, there's that whole editing process, which promises
to weed out any 'bad'ness; however, that would depend on the publication.
There's a difference between Crate,
the MFA journal at UMass,
Amherst
which accepts all submissions and, lets say
The
New York Times. The audiences are also drastically different.
Besides, I cant tell you how many times Ive seen my
work published and wished that I could change a line, replace
a word, and insert that missing comma. Even when it's published,
I can feel as though my work is just not good enough for me.
Speaking of which
'Good Enough for Me' is the last and most selective category.
In my entire three years here in the MFA program, I only have
three projects that reach this highest level of writing. Although
inclusion in this category doesnt necessarily assume admittance
into the 'Good Enough for Publication' category (and vice versa,
for that matter) it's the most important. It's only when a story
or chapter of my novel fits into this category that I can forget
about all the other ones. When I truly believe that my
fiction is good, that I'm a good writer. I can stop caring about
all the lists and canons and textbooks of which I may or may not
ever be a part. When I feel a piece of prose is good enough to
pass my own self-deprecating critique, when I'm not ashamed to
share it, when I'm proud to publish it, when I actually
enjoy reading it, thats when I remember why I'm writing
in the first place. I write because it feels good, and when a
poem, story, or novel of mine makes its reader think or feel;
inspires, infuriates or makes him or her wonder...that,
for me, is good writing.
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