walt whitman's elegy to a president slain
commentary by john-paul gillespie
published 15 february 2007
 
verse | volume 1 number 1
print
 
"Poetry is the music of the soul, and, above all, of great and feeling souls." -Voltaire
 
published since February 2007 | Verse centers on the survey of poetry.
 
 
A theatre and film graduate of Victoria University of Wellington, New Zealand, director, editor, cinematographer, Web developer, writer and (very) occasional actor John-Paul Gillespie (eMailblog) combines a deep knowledge of pre-modern French and German artistic cinema with a total disdain for the entire oeuvre—a dismissive attitude he elaborated fully in "The Needle in the Haystack Theory" (1995), the pre-doctoral highlight of a brief academic career and a scathing dissertation on the futility of intellectual myopicism. Off-camera, this aspiring auteur and member of the Sri Chinmoy Centre, who lives in Auckland, New Zealand, hones his cinematic eye in the design industry, and uses his practice of meditation as a source of energy and inspiration for his many creative pursuits. John also writes articles on poetry for Poetseers.org and Sri Chinmoy Poetry.
 
 
Thomas Cowperthwaite Eakins (25 July 1844 - 25 June 1916) was a painter, photographer, sculptor, and fine arts educator. He is associated with Realism, and is often identified as a father of American painting. -Wikipedia
 
 
Publisher: Penguin (June 1977)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 0140150781
ISBN-13: 978-0140150780
 
 
 

 
 
Advanced Notions (various)
formerly patsymooreDOTcoms Bonus Writings; insightful and inciting literature from artists and about art
Amsterdam Dispatch (Karin Bos)
an insider's look at the art scene and artist life in Amsterdam
The Art of Fiction (Peter Quinones)
reviews of timeless literature
author interviews
bohoTV (various)
noteworthy Arts-centric viral video
Cambridge Letters (Kym Cooper-Rodgers)
reports about art scenes abroad
(9/2004-12/2005)
Deleted Scenes (Stuart Chait)
a guide to the great cinema and television you're missing
Design Psychology (Jeanette Joy Fisher)
a look at how design elements contribute to happiness, well-being, and productivity
(7/2005-3/2007)
The Iraq Watch Papers (various)
observations on war and peace
(3/2003-7/2006)
Lessons in Creativity (Linda Dessau)
self-care tips for artists
London Letters (Shakila Taranum Maan)
reports about the London arts scene and design
On Books (Tim Haigh)
book criticism
Paris: Vie et Art (Francis Powell)
an insider's look at the art scene and artist life in The City of Light
Portrait of the Artist (various)
a gallery of work by compelling visualists
Rake on Music (Jamie Lee Rake)
your map to the music underground
Savor (Brian Parker)
a passionate survey of food and cooking
The Self Expressed (various)
creative writing
Special Assignment (various)
profiles and interviews
Tending the Planet (Alyssa Stebbing)
ruminations on social responsibility and spiritual life
Thus Spake Fred (Fred Clark)
smart, witty examinations of socio-political issues
transcripts from A Lovers Quarrel
(Dwight Ozard)
one man's documentation of his restless relationship with faith and culture
(6/2004-9/2005)
Verse (Jim Newcombe/John-Paul Gillespie)
poetry laid bare
Verse Live (various)
new poetry
The World Watch Papers (various)
inspections of matters impacting the globe
Write of Passage (Eboni Rafus)
journalings of a confirmed writer

Portrait of Walt Whitman
by
Thomas Eakins
 

Walt Whitman's status as poetic innovator and father to American verse is undisputed today; but, while alive, he enjoyed little public acclaim, only minor distribution—and much notoriety. Public and chattering classes aside, however, Whitman was critically acclaimed from his début; Ralph Waldo Emerson, so-called "father of American literature", wrote to the poet, upon receipt of Leaves of Grass, proclaiming "I greet you at the beginning of a great career", and later described Whitman's poetry as "a remarkable mixture of the Bhagvat Ghita and the New York Herald".


Lauded and republished around the world—especially so in England—Whitman never saw a broad appeal or readership at home, the main subject of—and intended audience for—the majority of his poetry—albeit in a single poem of which, ironically, the poet, himself, thought very little: "O Captain! My Captain!"

O Captain! my Captain! our fearful trip is done;
The ship has weathered every rack, the prize we sought is won;
The port is near, the bells I hear, the people all exulting,
While follow eyes the steady keel, the vessel grim and daring.
But O heart! heart! heart!
O the bleeding drops of red!
Where on the deck my Captain lies,
Fallen cold and dead.


With layout set deliberately to resemble a ship approaching a destination, "O Captain! My Captain!" is a masterful but rare example of rhymed, rhythmically regular verse by a poet renowned for innovative form and structure. There's no doubt the use of rhyme was intentional; written as immediate response to the assassination of Abraham Lincoln, in 1865, it served to create a fittingly somber, exalted effect; a bittersweet elegy of commiseration and commemoration.


The poem was published to immediate acclaim in the New York City Saturday Press, and was widely anthologized during Whitman's lifetime. He would be asked to recite the poem in public lectures and readings so often that he's quoted as saying "I'm almost sorry I ever wrote [it]," although it had "certain emotional immediate reasons for being".


Envisioning Lincoln as archangel captain, the poet is said to have dreamed, the night before that president's murder, of a ship entering harbor under full sail (an image dominant throughout), and the poem was deliberately typeset to appear on page as a vessel approaching its port of call.


It could be argued that, in Lincoln, Whitman saw the living embodiment of his poetic ideals: uniter of the nation, kindred opponent of slavery, harbinger of a golden future—a future of universal freedom and brotherhood, which the poet imagined as American destiny and tangible reality:


I am of old and young, of the foolish as much as the wise,
Regardless of others, ever regardful of others,
Maternal as well as paternal, a child as well as a man,
Stuff'd with the stuff that is coarse and stuff'd with the stuff that is fine,
One of the Nation of many nations, the smallest the same and the largest the same
 
-from "Song of Myself"


Poet Sri Chinmoy succinctly describes Walt Whitman's poetic and national vision as interchangeable:


"When the wind and storm of today bring in the golden Tomorrow, Whitman will shine forth, haloed in a new glory on the new horizon. His poems and his nation's consciousness are inseparable."

Lincoln's death was a violent blow to Whitman's American vision and confident proclamation. Already traumatized by the division of the just ended Civil War, "O Captain!" was written at a time of great despondency and personal soul-searching.


The poem saw its first official publication as an addition to Whitman's "Drum-Taps Civil War" poems, one of a grouping of poems under the title When Lilacs Last in the Dooryard Bloom'd and Other Pieces—name also to a more critically significant piece dedicated to Lincoln, preferred, by the poet, to the more conventional, populist "O Captain!"


Ever the perfectionist, Whitman revised "O Captain!" in 1866 and, then again, in 1871, a trademark practice of continual revision and never-ending improvement. His life work, Leaves of Grass, was recurringly revised from first publication in 1855 until 1892—the year of his death; the name for the final, definitive version, which included "O Captain!", is thus 'the Deathbed edition'.

 

Views expressed on this page may or may not be representative of The Bohemian Aesthetic or its founder. All materials appearing on this Web site are copyrights of patsymooreDOTcom, respective authors, or original sources.