folded and waiting sentence of suddenness
poetry by michael ladanyi
published 15 june 2007
originally published by retort magazine
 
verse live | volume 1 number 3
 
"Poetry is the music of the soul, and, above all, of great and feeling souls." -Voltaire
 
published since April 2007 | Verse Live centers on the publication of new poetry.
 
 
Michael Paul Ladanyi lives in the foothills of the North Georgia mountains with his wife and two daughters. His work has appeared in numerous print and online publications, spanning several countries. He served as a poetry editor for Rustlings of the Wind and contributing poetry reviewer for Write-away-poetry. Michael is also the co-editor of Exposé Express, as well as the creator and co-editor of Adagio Verse Quarterly.
 
 
GMB Chomichuk (eMailWeb site MySpace page) is a writer, artist, and founder of Alchemical Press, in Winnipeg, Manitoba (Western Canada). He is a proponent of illustrated, sequential, novel-length stories that are equal parts prose and picture. Current creative endeavors include: working as art director on two feature film projects with Absurd Machine Films, CD design and art direction with the band Tele, and writing/illustrating two novel-length projects for Alchemical Press. GMB has been part of the TBA staff since May 2007.
 
 
 

 
 
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folded and waiting
 
The bathroom mirror seems bone framed
and full of guile this morning, distorting
my reflection, conspiring with thin
shadows that patch my face with cold
shades of winter’s longing, though,
 
through the cracked window I hear
April's early, bird-pricked and layered
sounds. This coffee is cold, tastes of
 
the entrenched, already dead feeling,
of something you've said and wish
 
you could withdraw. In the still, cool
kitchen, all curtained, image-residue,
 
of the children and you, your half
eyes, morning smiles, have been
folded into the dark stain of the
 
cabinets, the green-white patterns of
new linoleum, waiting for your return.
Outside on the screened back porch,
morning birds have grown still, their
voices replaced by light and steady
 
rain that smells like poverty and love.
 
 
 
 
sentence of suddenness
 
The shredded morning light is fickle
against the windows' layered rain, a
steward of what is longing and
primitive. The leave-ladened oaks
 
hang as weeping willows, making
themselves feel ashamed, causing
minutes to contain many more
 
seconds of sight. Somewhere else
are you, dividing your memories
into thick lines of cocaine and
drops of stale whiskey, beneath
 
darkness under crying eyes and
drawn, time-browned shades. Down
and away in wilting shadows of
 
skinny alleys, withering concrete
bones and chain link veins, the
suddenness of what you are
killing cripples my tragic hand,
 
my roots in you pivot in tears and
drown. Laying our gathered memories
to waste, that suddenness finds me
 
here in this circled lamplight beside
this ivy-covered window sill in need
of paint, suspending and sentencing
our impressionistic intimacy.
 

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