olympia vernon's logic  (2004)
commentary by peter quinones
published 15 july 2006
 
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Peter Quinones (eMailWeb site), a resident of Brooklyn, New York, is currently working on a book about contemporary literature and its relationship to the culture as a whole. Several notable authors, interviewed by Peter for The Bohemian Aesthetic, are assisting him with that project.
 
 
 
Publisher: Atlantic Monthly Press
(8 April 2004)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 0802117716
ISBN-13: 978-0802117717
 
 
 

 
 
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Generally speaking, stories of abused or neglected children tend to work on our hearts and minds in a different way than most other types of stories; they affect us, make us feel more. This is because we were all children at one time and, secondly, because most of us have children of our own and such a story makes us shudder. Innocence and innocents cast out among callous, cruel, uncaring and unfeeling adults (themselves struggling in a world they never made) build a tremendous bridge to our sympathies. As Rick Pitino once said, when you build bridges you can keep crossing them, and that's what this type of story does with the bridges it has built to our deepest feelings. Whether the cruelty is of a physical, sexual, or psychological nature doesn't seem to matter so much; these stories seem, simply, to be of fantastic interest to us all. If the amount of information available on the subject of abused children is any indication, this is one of the most researched of all subjects in fields such as psychology, sociology, and health care. In literature, too—just take a look at Wikipedia's page on Child Sexual Abuse in Fiction to get a small idea.


Therefore, being that this is immediately familiar subject matter, and in attempting to undertake a fresh examination of it in a new creative work of art, it's probably advisable to try to marry the topic with something else in order to give it some zing. In the case of Olympia Vernon's novel, Logic, we're offered vistas of exploration that can send our psyches reeling. Vernon's prose and style attack from two different directions: on the one hand, it demands that the reader share its consistent hunger to participate in sensory experience; on the other hand, it is aware of—and appreciates—the underlying scientific order of what appears, to the casual observer, to be the chaos of experience.

 
 
Vernon
 
 

Initially, readers are very likely to be simply blown away by the unwearied, prototypal dander of Vernon's writing. There's hardly a page in the entire work which doesn't contain a surprising, original association or a uniting of concepts that we usually consider to be from quite different and distinct spheres. For example:


They all looked up on the branch above them where a sparrow, alive, had begun to sing, as if it had seen many disasters on the back roads of Mississippi.
 
She was arranging cups and saucers to match the blue-rimmed porecelain tiles of the floor. She was careful with her work. Dropping glass was as dangerous as catching babies. Everything that went into her mouth was broken into tiny pieces—the bones in her face fragile, the empty breasts, as if there was no fat beneath the nipples to push her self-esteem forward.


In this account, I'm not going to dwell too much upon the episodes and individual scenes of the story, itself, which is brutal, violent, sexually shocking, awash in powerful lives and deaths, strong emotions, and hardships; nor am I going to spend a lot of time on the relationships between the characters, which are rich and complex. Innocence defrocked is always going to contain large measures of pain. And, though this is not a plot-driven novel—it's plotless in a Chekhovian way—it's, nevertheless, a true page-turner because of Vernon's verbal thunderflashes. One wonders what evocative phrasings she's going to come up with next!


Instead, I'm going to concentrate on some elements of the structural underpinnings of the book.


David Harris and his wife, Too, live with their thirteen-year-old daughter, Logic, in rural Valsin County, Mississippi. The novel recounts their everyday experiences as well as those of some of their neighbors, principally a prostitute named George and her children, whom we come to know by designations instead of proper names: the girl, the tallest, curtis (lower case 'c') [names and naming comprise a vital part of the way Vernon invites the reader to see the world]. Early on, in the action, the scenes are grim: David loads a gun; Logic has a terrible fall out of an oak tree; David and Logic have incestuous relations; the tallest sodomizes the girl; George gives birth and nearly dies; the tallest kills a hatchling fetus from a bird's nest. Perhaps the most important thing a reader may notice, in these first pages, is how Vernon uses words and images to connect characters as a means of demonstrating human contact. Let me try to explain.


The book begins with a brief prologue about a lamb that is "struck a heavy blow" and begins to bleed profusely from the head. (This sequence is Biblically resonant, containing scripture-like passages such as "For He was that He is.") Just a page later, in reading about Logic's fall from the tree, we learn that "her head filled with blood". Shortly thereafter, we meet a lady called the Missis, whose house is a converted church, and, on one, of the windows "There was a picture of a lamb grazing.". The Missis remarks, "A lamb is a trapped child." Logic smells the Missis' hair and finds that there is blood in it ("You got blood in your hair...like me."). And, so, a conspiracy of similarities is formed: the lamb, Logic, and the Missis all bleed from the head; the lamb is actually physically manifested, its image on the window; Logic, thirteen years old and forced to have sex with her own father, is certainly a trapped child; therefore, she is certainly a lamb; etc.. But what does it all mean? How do we connect the dots? Vernon makes no suggestion; readers are invited to participate of their own accord.


In a second example, the image of an index finger is repeated several times in different contexts.


Trying to quiet his younger siblings, the tallest: "There he was raising his index finger in the air like a dipolomat, shouting." Then: "The tallest had dared her to speak, his index finger over her mouth." Again: "But the tallest turned away from him and raised his index finger again." Soon, "Too brought her hand to her face: the index finger rested on the tip of her nose." Later, "Logic had spent the hours looking at her index finger." Again, "David was not thinking of the man, not really, but the sound of his index finger in a glass of ice cubes." Now, you might say 'So What?', but the image of the finger is not one that would commonly pop up, and certainly not so many times; yet, like the images of the blood and the lamb, the meaning is left open—we intuit the symbolism, the imagery, but we can't grasp it fully. The reader is both invited and shut out at the same time. Challenging! The characters are enveloped in a swirl of cosmic language-dust.


The lamb/blood and the index finger aren't the only examples of this catching neology , which for convenience's sake we may just call "recurrence". We'll look at some more examples in a moment; but I would like to remark, here, that recurrence is one of five principal motifs a reader should be watching for in Logic; four others are those of names and naming; allusions to science, nature, and mathematics; attunement to the workings of the human body; and Mississppi as a sort of eternal land, an archetype. We'll go over each briefly, continuing, now, with recurrence.


A third recurrence has to do with the returning image/symbol of a wire hanger. Early on, the young girl Logic is carrying two wire hangers, one in each hand. Asked what she plans to do with them, she gives the surprising response that she wants to make wings. Much later in the story, in a more serious moment, we see a wire hanger being used to perform an abortion. Here the recurrence is relatively straightforward. A fourth involves the rather odd comparison of people's bodies to geometrical shapes—in one case a pyramid and, in the other, a trapezoid. The imagery of insects and bugs, particularly in regard to David Harris, is a fifth case (in one scene, he opens his mouth to speak and inadvertantly swallows a lightning bug; in another, after he is stung by an insect, its antennae get caught underneath his skin). A sixth case involves human nipples and breasts, recurring at least four or five times, by my count. And there are several more that alert readers may look for. In my reading experience, this sort of application of trademarks and josses containing sometimes synonymous, sometimes opposite meanings is quite singular; I'm sure I've never seen anything like it before. I'm not sure of the import it has, or the amount we should give it, but it's one-of-a-kind. Consider the following names and designations:


George (a female)
David
Logic
Too
curtis
the tallest
The Principle
the Missis
Celesta (a doll)
the man-made-of-paper
the girl
the ex-con
the old woman
the woman


The only one of these that is, in any way, "normal" is David; every other one carries critical information about the given character, and what's interesting about the methods of expression is that, sometimes, the description is as simple as can be, a mere generic noun (the girl, the woman), sometimes a sort of proper name (notice that The Principle has the "t" in "The" capitalized, while the "t" in "the Missis" does not; why?). Sometimes, the names are outwardly, boldly symbols, as the Missis—half of the phonemes contained in the whole word 'Mississippi', it dawned on me after a while—is clearly a symbol of Mississippi, itself ("Logic was in the Missis' bedroom, bending hangers for her wings. The Missis herself was naked. Her breasts were deformed, her waist meek."; In other words, the old order is collapsing, decaying, not strong. New days are dawning.) Sometimes, a person's designation has to do with what they do; for instance, the man-made-of-paper is a rich john who comes to visit George frequently, and the ex-con is self-explanatory. However, the most interesting name is that of 'the tallest'. Writing it that way, instead of 'The Tallest', is more visual, almost like inserting a little picture of him in the text where his name should be, and even though we're explicitly told that the tallest is the way Logic thinks of him, no one else in the book thinks of him any differently or refers to him by any proper name. Lastly, in regard to the name of 'Celesta'—an interesting choice of name for the doll of a black child in rural Mississippi! At a couple of points, however, a book by an unnamed Italian philosopher is mentioned as being in the tallest's possession, and the tallest has frequent social interaction with Logic, whose doll Celesta is; maybe there's a correlation.


In any case, the subject of the names and designations of the characters is intensely interesting if for no other reason than that it's so refreshingly unusual. (I wish I had the time to go into it further.)


Concerning the third and fourth motifs—those of awareness of the body and its functions and allusions to science, mathematics and nature—our Q and A with Vernon, below, touches on these, and they're sufficiently important to let the author speak for herself, there. I just want to point out that, over the course of the whole of Logic, there begins to unfold a view of a human life not only as a series of mental and emotional experiences but, also, as a biosystem—literally as a functioning biological organism whose rhythms and processes work in unison with the mind. Of course, at some level, we're all aware of this, but it's rare that one sees this most basic, this most visceral understanding brought out, full blush, in a work of imaginative literature. Virtually every page resounds with it, and it's an extremely striking concept. And on the idea of science, nature, mathematics—allow me to touch briefly on one conceptualization. You could read as many as a hundred novels in a row and not see something described in terms of the spatial relationships of geometry; within the first twenty pages, here, it happens twice. In fact, the very name "Logic" contains endless mathematical associations if read in the sense of, say, Frege. David Harris thinks of himself as a mathematician. And "The rock was no star. It was solid, like problems and mathematicians who could tell the difference between a trapezoid and the insanity of numbers."


Lastly, I think we should give consideration to Vernon's identification of Mississppi; here, she belongs in the great tradition of Southern writers such as Faulkner and Welty, among others. Mississippi is not to be confused with heaven, for sure, but it is just as much a land of myth as ancient Greece or ancient Rome. On these pages, eternal human stories are played out, ringing down through the ages:


Too was a maid and midwife for the folks in Valsin County, Mississippi.
 
It did not matter, in Valsin County, Mississippi, who a girl belonged to. Neither did it matter that the blood in your body was as hers, light like hers and running away from something, something tainted.
 
It was July in Valsin County, Mississippi.
 
Secrets lie dormant in Mississippi. You never know the full truth about anything. There is what your folks choose to tell you and whay you, yourself, discover. One or the other is poisonous, vain.
 
"Find you some'n God made and love on it. But don't you look back on Valsin County."
 
No one ever knew what time it was in Valsin County, Mississippi. Perhaps they should have.


These sentences point to a quixotic land of fable; the emphasis on the specificity of locale (why not simply "It was July"; we know where it is) working to point up the status of the place. As universal as the themes and morals strive to be, the story still exists within an identity of place that can only be this place, at this time, if that makes any sense. By making the story particular, it paradoxically grows to be more universal.


Eventually, Olympia Vernon will be spoken about on equal terms with writers like DeLillo or Morrison, as far as outstanding the prose stylists of our time go; her sentences dig the deepest wells within us, create a poetry of quotidian involvement that's a very, very scarce thing in writing of any era. I think what makes Logic so interesting is that it pulls the reader in and pushes her away at the same time, soliciting interpretations or meanings but then refusing to confirm or deny them. This, of course, is a result of following the characters instead of manipulating them, which is a hard level of discipline for a writer of fiction to reach. I think it shows a great respect for the reader, and I think it also probably hints at greater things to come.

 
 
THE INTERVIEW


QUINONES: It seems to me that your characters—or, perhaps sometimes, your omniscient narrator—have an unusually high degree of awareness of—or sensitivity to—their physical bodies. Virtually every page of Logic contains a reference of this kind (sometimes the image is recurring, i.e. that of the index finger). I was wondering if, as a writer of fiction, your interest in this comes, at least partly, from your background in criminal justice.


VERNON: My interest in Criminal Justice does not play any part in my writing: this degree stemmed mainly from wanting to change/save (due to age) the world. My connection to the human body is one I was born with; I found that when people move, cry, run, scream, speak, bathe, commit themselves to the simplest forms of expression, they are most genunine in behavior. There is a beauty there. As a child, I could not help but notice the bodies around me, especially those of Mississippi. They were stunning, graphic, raw, expressive; the face of one born in the Deep South, the body, the throat, the hands, all these things are unique to any other human body/form in the entire world. I am not sure if it is the earth or dust that makes it so.


QUINONES: Is the following passage fairly representative of your view of an important part of human experience?: "Somebody told her that a woman without a map in her feet was running from a dream: courage began when the fetus was asleep in the womb and there was a vertical thread that tied the feet together in order to test the strength of the mind. Everything was connected in this way: head to feet, neck to ankles, breasts to abdomen. It's no wonder that when one breaks down, one member of the pair is affected by the other."


VERNON: I have never been asked this question before and/or given a passage to measure it. I will say this is the closest view, yes. The brain is a powerful source of intelligence and for those who do not respect it, failure. It moves the feet in the direction it should go. This direction can be fatal if the voice of the brain is not listened to accurately. I have found it amazing when a baby lies nude in the womb and his/her feet are bound together, as if there is a measure of rest and profound intelligence taking place. Yes, the human body is a force.


QUINONES: Kind of as a corollary to the above: you're very tuned in to science, the scientific structure of natural phenomena—atoms, molecules, mathematics, nature itself. To what degree are your characters merely inhabitants of nature, to what degree are they something more?


VERNON: When a mother breathes while pregnant, she molds and shapes the fetus, the child, to the environment of atoms, molecules, mathematics, nature. This is why it is unsafe for a mother to smoke while pregnant. The fetus inhales the fumes of the cigarette and the cigarette, itself, shapes the fetus. The fetus has been shut in, locked inside a room of which there are walls and he cannot flee. I have been blessed with the ability to notice the natural phenomena of the human being. The characters who bless me with their presence and language have been molded, since birth, by the natural events of nature and science. Their mothers have breathed the dust and they are, themselves, shaped by an infinite degree of nature, without choice. They can only hope the dust they inhale is of good and solid and natural, God-made, profound elements. Characters, as they are written, as they share with me, open their blouses and ribs and bodies and reveal to me the air they have breathed. This is when they become something more than what they have breathed, something more than nature, for they have begun, by now, to interpret what they have inhaled and become more solid as beings.


QUINONES: Your prose is quite original. How do you work on your sentences?


VERNON: With each book, the entire piece comes to me at once: the words, the feelings and emotions, the title, the beginning, the ending is sometimes blurry but becomes more clear as I write from the characters' feelings. I do not work on sentences. They come to me instantly, the vision comes in less than a second and it is equivalent to being, I'm thinking now, or becoming, I should say, a part of a ray of light that is so sudden that it warms the bones of the entire body; it is beautiful, yet the energy is so very striking that I must sit, regardless of where I am, and breathe, so I am not overtaken by it. I realized, after hearing from a teacher that I was a writer and looking over my years of growing up, that I am, indeed, a gifted writer of feelings, emotions, pain, sorrow, the interpreter of human beings and their interactions with themselves, others, love, suffering, etc.. The sentences I write, I do not claim them solely and give them to the characters for sharing their language with me so beautifully. It is a painful thing at times to be gifted. A gifted writer will suffer her body and mind to take on the voice(s) of her characters, until she is overtaken with sweat and fever and cannot remember what day of the week it is. Yet, I cannot return to the womb and change this. It is a blessing, a gift.


QUINONES: Do they just flow spontaneously, or do you have certain things you want to do with things like language metaphor, and symbols?


VERNON: Yes, they flow. I do not pay attention to language, metaphor and symbols while I am writing. The characters point in the direction that bears their language and I go. I am unsure how their emotions run together or apart while I am writing; I am only aware when the process of transcribing their lives is over what they have done, how they have murdered, raped, killed, loved, suffered, starved, etc.. It is none of a writer's business what the character is doing. It is only the writer's job to follow them around: I have written from the voice of many characters who believe differently than I on many levels; but, from the voice of characters who teach me, show me why they have chosen to think as they do. I learn more about racism, love, hate, suffering, pain, every element of humankind from my characters than from any other source in the world. They are beautiful, dirty, fragile, etc., and I have been fortunate that each has shared with me such qualities so that I may live my life with the wisdom of knowing they have lived their own lives, albeit beautiful, dirty, fragile, etc. and given me the permission to view it.


QUINONES: Do you have any special type of preparation for creating such poetic prose?


VERNON: No. I never know when it's coming, so I cannot prepare for it. When it does come, however, I will sometimes make a call to family/friends letting them know that I'm going in.


QUINONES: I read, in one of your online interviews, mention of a writer I was startled to see you talking about, at first—Hubert Selby, Jr.. However, upon reflection, it seems that there is a certain similarity in your work and Selby's, in terms of the violence, and violent emotions, that the characters experience. What kind of a role, if any, do you intend for physical suffering to play in your fiction?


VERNON: I never "intend" for physical suffering to play a role in my prose. I have always seen darkness as a genuine element of the human condition that seeps through, bleeds. I think when we are content, as human beings, we are content because we are trying to prevent the darkness or physical suffering from fully taking over. Physical suffering is genuine. It exists. It is a crucial part of the cycle of life and, without it, we are unaware of our true feelings, the true details of our feelings. We are simply actors without it. We are simply minute characters on a large stage and we are all pretending, in some way, that our physical suffering can be tucked away inside our bodies, so that we may be able to join others on an even larger stage of pretending; it is simply when we can no longer mask the suffering (via death, loss, heartbreak, etc.) that the full beam of the darkness presents itself. And we have no choice. We must acknowledge its existence.


QUINONES: There's a tendency to try to classify writers from the South as belonging to a type of genre unto itself, solely based on geographical roots, and there's also a clear tendency to categorize African American writers in their own genre. Do you think such classifications are helpful or harmful in any specific ways?


VERNON: It has always bothered me to be classified as an African-American writer. It is clear that I am an African-American. This is a fact I embrace. But when I am "classified" as an African-American writer, it says that the voice of my characters is solely an African-American voice with African-American problems and African-American suffering belonging to one people. This is untrue. Never do I want anything written by my hand to possess one type of pain for one group of people with one source of meaning and so on and so forth. The issues of rape, racism, poverty, obesity, violence, prostitution, etc. are universal issues; I care about the voice of the raped, the obese, the wronged; and I couldn't care less about what race I am when I am writing from such an energy. I care about the issue and the person experiencing the issue, regardless of what race he or she is.


I also feel there is an African-American "list" that is bestowed upon the African-American writer; I am supposed to have read, by now, all the Langston Hughes, Richard Wright, James Baldwin, Zora Neale Hurston I can get my hands on; but, even these writers, when they are described, are described as African-American writers and I simply do not agree that I should embrace such a list, to no disregard for the writers before me; but, I would rather share it because of what I have written not because it is an odd event to be African-American and gifted.


The Deep South has produced some of the finest writers in the world, if not the finest, and if I were categorized in any way that is pleasing to me, it would be as a southern writer. This way I can share the list of those both black and white and be regarded for my literary contribution to the spirit of the world and/or mankind.


QUINONES: It seemed to me that Logic and A Killing in This Town are quite different, thematically. Is that a correct perception, and, in general, would you say you're interested in exploring distinct themes in different novels? Even if that's the case, are there any constant themes running through your work?


VERNON: I never plan. This is very well the reason for each book having its own distinct voice and presence. I know not what character will wake me from my slumber or if I will at all like him. It is not my position to like or love or judge; it is only after I have experienced the experience that I realize the course the book has taken. There is nothing more fascinating than a writer partaking in an experience that is foreign to her, that strikes, belittles, kills, goes against all the symptoms of normalcy and into the realm of an active womb filled with the lives and voices of the confused and as they are working it out, we, the gifted writers, are simply embraced by the presence of their breathing.

 

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