chester himes' the primitive  (1955)
commentary by peter quinones
published 05 june 2006
 
the art of fiction | volume 1 number 14
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"A good book is the precious life-blood of a master spirit, embalmed and treasured up on purpose to a life beyond life. -John Milton
 
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Peter Quinones (eMailWeb site), a resident of Brooklyn, New York, is currently working on a book about contemporary literature and its relationship to the culture as a whole. Several notable authors, interviewed by Peter for The Bohemian Aesthetic, are assisting him with that project.
 
 
 
Publisher: Signet Books #1264 c.1955 p.1956
(1956)
Language: English
ASIN: B000N287XM
 
 
 

 
 
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Kriss shuddered with a sadistic thrill, at once excited and repulsed by the prospect of seeing Jesse writhing on the floor with blood spurting from his cut throat because her skin was white.

Passages such as this suggest to me that Chester Himes might well have been the original rage against the machine. This novel (in some editions called The Primitive; in others, The End of a Primitive) is so intense, so furiously hateful and angry, so disturbing, so full of wrath and pent up frustrations—all of which make it very hard to think and write about. At the same time, it's very funny in places. Its themes, and handling of them, will make virtually every reader uncomfortable—and therein lies its importance, in its refusal to flinch. However, it isn't the novel—itself, alone—that's interesting; it exists within a very compelling set of circumstances. We know it's based on a real life affair Himes had with a white woman named Vandi Haygood, who died of a drug ovedose in 1955. The lines between the facts and the fiction are somewhat blurry. Himes describes both the novel and the conditions in his life under which he composed it in his two volumes of autobiography, The Quality of Hurt and My Life of Absurdity; nevertheless, James Sallis, in his authoritative biography Chester Himes: A Life, declares that:


His late memoirs are so rife with conflation and confabulation, highly suspect. Memory at best is an uncertain instrument, and the volumes of autobiography Himes wrote when well past sixty resound with errors of fact, skewed sequences, even incorrect dates for central experiences.


In my opinion, this is a novel best studied with all these observations, and more, kept in mind; indeed, I would say The Primitive is a great candidate for a kind of concentration in which critical, biographical, and autobiographical writings about the work in question are as important as the work, itself. It's exhausting and draining for both characters and readers, as it must have been for Himes to write, though he talks about its composition almost as if it were a mystical experience: "By then I had reduced myself to the fundamental writer, and nothing else mattered." (Himes wrote the novel in Spain while living with a woman he had met on the ship going over to Europe, Willa Thompson Trierweiler. His account of their relationship takes up a huge chunk of The Quality of Hurt.)
 
 
Himes
 
 
It begins with a trenchant passage describing Kriss Cummings' awakening to a new day; and the sequence is wholly mordant, weird, so unlike any other writing or point of view that we know—startling, mesmerizing, both engaging and repulsive at once, simultaneously pulling us in while almost completely turning us off to Kriss' character and persona. Great pains are taken to describe the difference between 'loneliness' and 'aloneness'. As she comes slowly out of sleep, her arm 'searchingly' seeks a man beside her to hold; there is none. There comes a little exposition about her ex-husband, whom she despised; but, tellingly, she could always count on the 'security of his presence'. She's mortified of being alone, yet she wakes up alone almost every day. She sleeps with countless men, evidently, simply for the purpose of not being alone. (The edition I have reads eighty-seven men, though Sallis quotes an edition which reads one hundred and eighty-seven. As a brief aside, I want to mention that the edition I have is from a major paperback publisher, Signet Books, circa 1960s and is so chock full of typos and proofreading mistakes that it raises some real questions. It's hard to believe it was ever put on shelves. I'd like to know the story behind that!) The apartment is described as 'like waking in a grave'. Kriss' routine of endless drinking, endless meaningless sex, and constant TV watching is evidently only broken up by the hours she spends at her job as Assistant Director of the India Institute. We see her dressing for work, choosing a red dress because it makes her feel daring and 'She couldn't get along in the world without feeling daring.'


Himes cuts to another scene in which the other major character, Jesse Robinson, is also waking up in the morning. The author draws subtle distinctions—Kriss' apartment is in Grammercy Park, Jesse's in Harlem; hers is back from the street, with the windows looking only upon the lifeless bricks of another building, cut off, dreary, while his windows allow views of the city. She's alone, he has roommates (who provide some great comic scenes, especially the little dog). Most pointedly, Himes criss crosses-scenes in which Kriss and Jesse ponder their nude bodies in mirrors: she's disgusted by hers, he's satisfied with his. This series of contrasts in which her side consists wholly of negatives and his side is made up of comparative positives is somewhat misleading upon a first reading because it makes it seem as though he's the good guy and she's some evil noir man-eater, and that's all there is to it. And, in fact, Himes does employ many of the techniques of the classical noir story; the Wikipedia page on Noir Fiction lists him as one of the main practicioners of the genre. There are almost uncountable instances in the novel where Kriss is said to act or speak toward Jesse 'viciously' or 'maliciously'; Himes invents a phrase, 'secret sensual smile' that he uses ad naseum in regard to Kriss, and he means to suggest that she employs this as a weapon against her men.


And she would smile her secret sensual smile, that cream-fed look of unfaithful women that no painter on Earth has ever caught.


The novel opens with them apart and takes about fifty pages to gather a head of steam until they finally come together for a drunken, pill-popping weekend of hostile sex and bitter conversation, of paradoxical love and perfervid hate. Himes is working out two things, here, that were consuming him in his personal life, at the time: his furious disappointment at not really making it as a writer in the States and his obsession with interracial relationships. I mentioned that The Primitive is based, in large measure, on his romance with Vandi Haygood; at the very start of The Quality of Hurt he shares his reasons for eschewing America:


Another is that I came very close to killing the white woman, Vandi Haygood, with whom I had lived; and I was both shocked and frightened. I suppose murder, and more, given America's sex and racism syndrome, when the potential murderer is a black male and his potential victim a white female. I had always believed that to defend my life, or my honor, I would kill a white man without a second thought. But when I discovered that this applied to white women, too, I was profoundly shaken. Because, by then, white women were all I had left.


As the yarn grinds through its alternating harrowing scenes and comic moments, time becomes a blur, a jumble; the characters proceed to torment each other in a thick haze of alcohol and explosive emotion that makes them lose track of what happened when. Saturday night is, all of a sudden, Sunday morning. A major event in the story is reported on television news before it actually takes place in the novel, raising the question of the actual chronology of events described. It could be that Himes intentionally wants to demonstrate to us how stewed the characters' minds are. Sallis writes:


They grow more and more confused as to the sequence of events, what they have dreamed or remembered and what has actually occurred, whether it is day or night, how much time has passed. Himes' careful writing bears the reader directly and fully into that confusion, culminating in a blackout for the reader much like Jesse's own.


It could be that this is due to careful writing, indeed, but I think it could also be that Himes' view of the nature and character of memory, as a whole, is that it's a farrago, impossible to organize coherently, at all [see the quote above noting the 'conflation and confabulation' in Himes' memoirs]. It could be that Himes is really pushing the envelope of the roman à clef as far as he can. (There is a passage in the book that is a word-for-word lift of an episode that appears in the autobiography, a story of how Himes got into a small fender-bender with a drunken rich lady of the town; he was, of course, tossed into jail and his wife encountered some serious hardships in getting him sprung. This is not a short passage; it goes on for some pages. That it appears in both books, virtually verbatim, is astonishing and disorienting, and it suggests to us that Himes is playing a kind of game, mixing fact and fiction like the ingredients of a stew, inviting us—or, perhaps, daring us?—to try to separate them, sort out one from the other.)


The instance in which Jesse visits his editor, James Pope, to collect his latest manuscript, serves to illuminate the fever heat he feels toward the American literary establishment and, in reverse, it demonstrates the way some (most?) whites in Jesse's world feel towards black writers. He's already guessed, long ago, that the publisher is passing on the book. He remains polite throughout the meeting, barely able to keep the lid on the simmering Pandora's Box of bare emotions contained beneath his somewhat composed exterior (he's not one hundred percent under control; he does let a few zingers slip out). One of the explanations Pope gives for the novel's rejection—"The public is tired of the plight of the poor downtrodden Negro"—sounds quite similar to sentiments Kriss expresses, or starts to express, such as "White people are tired of being hated by you..." Everything exists in strands, fragments, but they're tied up and wrapped around each other—Kriss, racism, the publisher, the reading public, booze—it's all of a piece in Jesse's perception. The main form of incursion from the outside world exists in the presence of the television in Kriss' place, which plays all the time, and the authority of which never seems to be questioned.


Personally, I feel that The Primitive must be important in big ways that I find difficult to articulate; it shoots off in so many different directions, is so malleable and bendable, a hunk of clay that can be shaped according to the reader's predilections. Even psychoanalysis has come into play with some commentators. In an essay called "Slaying The Fathers: The Autobiography of Chester Himes", from the collection The Critical Response to Chester Himes, Gary Storhoff wrote:


His sexuality becomes a weapon for him to punish women but also to expect (and, perhaps, welcome) punitive responses from them. His tumultuous relationships with women reveal Himes' own will to control and dominate, his own need to fulfill a code of brutal masculinity, but, also, his need to experience abuse and punishment in return. His typical attraction to neurotic, depressive women, in unconscious rebellion against his strong mother who plays the patriarch's role in his childhood, ironically brings him much unhappiness...


Psychoanalyzing an author in this way takes a great deal of confidence on the part of the critic, and perhaps a more in-depth knowledge of the work than I can claim to have. I only offer the observation as an example of the big possible orbits that present themselves in studying Himes.


The Primitive, and the legend, aura, and mystique surrounding its author, are endlessly engaging and compelling. In my view, any faults in the composition, and any ugliness or near insanity in the viewpoint, is well worth enduring because of the honesty with which the author confronts not-so-pretty feelings and behaviors. If you're not fidgeting around in your chair while you read this novel, if you don't feel forced to pause and think about some of the emotions you may have felt in your own relationships, something's wrong. And to force a response within a reader's heart is one of the hardest goals the novelist can set for him/herself.

 

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